I try to distance myself from you,
try not to be so close.
But today, I drew a heart on your arm,
and a smile to go with it.
You ignored it at first, then looked,
and banged your head on the table..
I tilted my head down, and wanted to
know what you were thinking..
if it be of me.
We cycled back, and you taught me
how to cycle with no hands..
i did it to try to impress you,
and try to make you mine.
but now..
all i can see is your eyes,
those deep blue eyes.
I've had no signs,
no nothing.
Since that last time.
It was just me and you.
What am i to do?
When i can only think
of you.
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it was realy nice but also sad but good!
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this is a great poem
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Aww. this is sad but beautiful in a way the language flows very well and suits the way the poem is presented, that's so important, don't you think? I haven't got that skill yet, but I'm working on it. You should be proud of this poem.
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Thank you very much for your comments =)
Presentation is everything in a poem.
Again thank you for your lovely comforting words.
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