I want to kiss you in the rain
I want to see the lightning behind you
Tightly holding hands,
Kissing in the rain
I want to hear the rolling thunder
And feel the rain puddle at my feet
To warm myself in your embrace
As I kiss you in the rain
I want see you without your armor, my knight
There aren't any dragons here
So let me help you remove it
So you can kiss me in the rain
I want to hide away from the world
With you and you alone
To see your smiling face
As we share kisses in the rain
Author notes
I should share this fantasy with Will. I hope you like it!
A contest entry
- The Second Annual Goddess of Rain by Ted E Bare.
300 points, ended July 8, 2008, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is simply beautiful as it speaks to my heart for I love kissing in the rain. I think you should do this with Will. Turn the fantasy into a reality for you will love the kissing in the rain. Thanks for a fantastic entry. I want to thank you for participating in the "Second Annual Goddess of Rain' contest
Ted E
PS: I will be reading all entries at the minimum of twice to give maximum consideration.
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Very romantic, there seems to be almost a longing in your words...though such lovely feeling your words express.
♥
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