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Kissing in the Rain

I want to kiss you in the rain
I want to see the lightning behind you
Tightly holding hands,
Kissing in the rain

I want to hear the rolling thunder
And feel the rain puddle at my feet
To warm myself in your embrace
As I kiss you in the rain

I want see you without your armor, my knight
There aren't any dragons here
So let me help you remove it
So you can kiss me in the rain

I want to hide away from the world
With you and you alone
To see your smiling face
As we share kisses in the rain

Author notes

I should share this fantasy with Will. I hope you like it!

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  • Ted E Bare gold member
    July 8, 2008

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    This is simply beautiful as it speaks to my heart for I love kissing in the rain. I think you should do this with Will. Turn the fantasy into a reality for you will love the kissing in the rain. Thanks for a fantastic entry. I want to thank you for participating in the "Second Annual Goddess of Rain' contestTed E

    PS: I will be reading all entries at the minimum of twice to give maximum consideration.


  • Pisces Pieces
    June 25, 2008

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    Very romantic, there seems to be almost a longing in your words...though such lovely feeling your words express.

    ♥