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I am really Sorry!

                                    I Am Really Sorry!

                                      Petite one in the store
                                      when you walked up to me
                                      I realized not that you were
                                      the one to whom I had kindly
                                      commented

                                      I thought you needed a spice and
                                      that I was in your way realizing
                                      too late that I was mistaken
                                      I really did like you!

                                  I wanted to some how contact you
                                  but before I found a way it was
                                  necessary for me to move away- if
                                  only you weren't in San Francisco
                                  and if only that fowl up had not occurred
                                  I am really sorry!

Author notes

I wrote this feeling guilty, 3 years ago. Mr. Cat

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  • Nikki Rowles
    June 19, 2008
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    woulda could shoulda....very much seems to fit this poem...although I really can't relat to it...it is very good

    Dhrace


  • Rianna Bear
    June 19, 2008

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    the woulda coulda shoulda's is what this sounds like time traveling uncle! been there and done plenty of those! this felt really honest...and sincere.


    Rianna