There I stand still
Bare and in awe
Of such a timeless divinity
Out and standing as I am
In blue glowing plains
Under the mysterious Lune
Watching a war wage & qualm
A battle of justice
Verses over confident stars
And humble shimmers
Yet never have I embraced such a zephyr
In which I find kissing my face tonight
This cool explosion that immerses me so
Like water through xylem it is powerful
Almost drowning me as I stare
Still in awe of the battle above this planet
That, I so insignificantly occupy
Zephyr filling my lungs with this chill over taking me
Causing my toes to curl
And my lips to purse
Yet my body is undergoing such unusual sensations
My eyes are still fixed
On this show cast before my very own
Until it falls gone into the morning
Leaving me to journey on
And the stars justice is to be seen now,
From another insignificance
Whose evening show
Has just begun
Author notes
This is for option number 7.. I felt this poem all over my body.. kind of weird I know, but I really enjoyed the inspiration... I made some alterations to the time setting of the picture. Just flowed out I guess.. I hope you enjoyed what I created for you..
A contest entry
- Options Contest for the Creative Mind by chasingwhiterabbits.
700 points, ended June 20, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think is underlining in the poem?
Comments
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I did enjoy this poem. Your word choice is excellent, and I love the way the picture inspired you. You definitely are a finalist.
Thanks for entering!
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