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Animal

Missing image

On the back of wild beast

your animal comes out

and I howl

with unbridled lust

as my hardness

slips into your softness.

Lust primeval

silences

rational mind.


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pic:http://rottencandy.deviantart.com/art/The-Zebra-had-to-die-75534543
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  • hotchocolate gold member
    July 13, 2008

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    Nice and short I like this. The pic. you picked out for this poem was a great choice. You got her number?!!!! (LOL)


  • Still single
    July 2, 2008
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    thanks for the erotic entry, short and dirty.


  • Dalaney gold member
    June 21, 2008
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    thud.....


    • breedluv gold member
      June 22, 2008
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      Didn't think I had it in me, did you? Need some help getting up off the floor?


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    June 20, 2008
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    Congratulations on a well deserved bronze...now speechless


  • Swangrnv gold member
    June 19, 2008
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    good stuff!

    congrats on the bronze!


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    June 19, 2008

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    That ending is fab!! And the whole piece has an raw sexual animal heat about it!!! Very hot indeed!!!


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    June 19, 2008
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    Amazing take.

    Best of luck.


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    June 19, 2008

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    Oh my This is sure steamy I think I see a Gold here! whew HOT!


  • jcat gold member
    June 19, 2008

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    WOW!!!! You just lit a fire with this one!!! Silences rational mind.....How utterly true!!! This was HOT.....Best wishes!

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