Biting my fingers I wait in anticipation
Not knowing what to expect, but expecting
Thoughts linger through my head
Racing around making me lose my mind
Nothing seems to make sense anymore
Yet everything is so clear
I am waiting for something to happen
When all I want to do is dematerialize
Words can not explain how it feels to be so empty
But even though I am empty I have so much to process
So much to worry about and so much to stress
As I sit here alone just yearning to relax
Author notes
Just a thought I was having and feeling.
What did you think
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You have an obvious talent....your words and flow in this poem were impecable.....i absolutely loved this poem and my favorite lines in the poem are
"Biting my fingers I wait in anticipation
Not knowing what to expect, but expecting
Thoughts linger through my head
Racing around making me lose my mind
Nothing seems to make sense anymore"
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This was really good. Your emotions are clearly expressed and is thought provoking in an aspect and it really related to how I feel sometimes. Great work with the vocabulary to get your inner message across. Excellent!
~Emily~ xx
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very well writen exellent ending
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beautiful
haha I have to remind myslef the same message everyday. This is a pretty good write.. I saw on your page you said you didn't think you were very good but you have talent my dear
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I like the poem and can relate...seriously, its so good to recognize when we're feeling like this...I get like this often and have to remind myself and kick myself out of it, by telling myself to JUST LET IT GOOoooo....writing about it must have definetly helped, no?
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This was a really nice piece, I liked the way the title straight away contrasts with the beggining of the poem. I think you really captured the uneasiness very well and main it really easy to appreicate the confusion of an unsettled mind. I looked the kind of oxymoron that the mind is so full and yet it is possible to feel so empty that it is indescribable. Congratulations on a great piece which shows your emotions really well and that i am sure many people will be able to easily relate to as sometimes it is just hard to chill out. I hope you find the relaxation you are looking for, best wishes x
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i have recently felt like this and i couldn't quite explain it! way to express your feelings in poetry. it is somewhat a confusing feeling and poem but the art does what it was intended to do.
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I can so relate to what you have written here... I got dumped the fifth of june and before that date, I had everything except worries and stress, now it seems to be just the other way around unfortunately...
I hope things will get better for you soon though.
Keep the ink flowing!
Leander
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