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I use to have a friend

I use to have a friend

he was a man

he was no dog

he was my all

he loved me so

i thought he would never let me go

but then one day

my friend got a girl

who is now his whole world

Now i have no friend

at least not that man

He will always be in my heart

but for now we are apart

I use to have a friend

he was a man

but now my friend has a girl

she is his whole world

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  • Lislaine
    August 22, 2008
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    awww really nice! goodluck!!


  • unreachablecloud
    June 21, 2008

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    oh my that's really good. There are lots of ppl who feel the same but couldn't put it into words like you have. X