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Fruit of Knowledge...

Pool of remembrance,
Silver sweet shining apple of the eye,
Reflective illuminating orb,
Graceful in the sky,
Captivating imaginative hearts of child, mage and sage.

A contest entry

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  • celadia
    July 10
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    this has beautiful language. good luck in contest.

  • Ruby34
    June 20

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    What a wondeful poem, great use of words..short and lovely..best of luck in the contest..A winner in my book!
    Ruby

  • Livingemptyspaces
    June 19

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    Good use of vocabulary and a beautiful image in paints. Great job and good luck in the contest.

    -Les