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Unwritten, The Way It Shall Stay.




The games of hide and seek we'd share,

a sense of light heartiness in the air -

the gravel under stuck bicycle wheels,

still can remember how those days feel.

The moving house and empty room,

a place so far, I felt so doomed.

The taunts and tears to stand out,

memories I could do without.

The touch of a tainted fingertip,

oh how I never expected this.

The moans and groans and tears,

he caused unmistakable fear.

All else between and after this,

is all like a daze, a haze, a mist;

the memoirs are unwritten nor said,

for they stay stuck in my aching head.

When words will never be wrote,

the truth it catches in your throat.

The pain and angst lays dormant,

in a heart with hate and torment.

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There's many other things that have happened in my life and the things even mentioned, are very deep and complicated. Things that I doubt I'll ever release to anyone, because I am truly ashamed.

~ Unwritten ~

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  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    June 22, 2008

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    So sad!

    This touched my heart. Bravo to you for being able to pen these words. Being able to think to write out the pain in our lives is the first step in the healing process. We must rid ourselves of pent up anger, pain, & the traumas that we experience in life! Holding on to these memories only causes us more pain & we continue to perpetuate the abuse, this time on ourselves by holding the pain in willfully! Let go of what you don't want in your heart & you will heal. That's what I've found in my life. Great write from the heart.


  • enitsirhC
    June 21, 2008
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    This is really good, even though it makes my heart cry


    Good luck in your contest dear.


  • Kiss the girl--x
    June 20, 2008
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    This was heartbreaking

    Beautiful, but so so so sad
    and as we've found time after time I can relate.
    What a lovely thing to have in common =/ *sarcasm*

    The last two stanzas were just so, how I feel, but I could never display it so elegantly.

    I'm always here sweetie
    loves. always


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    June 20, 2008

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    it is the unwritten that haunts us and the unspoken the wishes to escape, i think you will tell someone one day, that is up to you, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • sapphireangelwings
    June 19, 2008

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    This is an example of why this song means so much to me. We are all unwritten pages......I truly hope you find the courage to write this chapter of your life and in doing so find peace and healing. Very powerful write you have penned.


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    June 19, 2008

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    this is a powerful write and you ahve added so much detail into thispiece with a lot of thought into it. i really hope your ok sweetie

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