When we fall in love, our heart turns into a child's heart but.... Unknown
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With eyes of innocence and lips of joy,
the leap to love was as childhood dreams.
Smiles came and went freely through new days,
sharing our voice, giggles blew in soft wind .
Blanketed in cozy warmth, we shared kisses
and hugged under the shade of tall Oak trees.
Memories of those days gone by linger,
tasted in the salt of my silent tears.
Waking one morning, your presence stolen,
life forced this soul down a long, darkened path.
Deceit and anger filled the cup I held,
offering my tongue bitterness and grief.
Often, I dream of the disappearance,
stretching my vision down long corridors.
You found refuge in your own solitude,
taking my heart's soul as you walked away.
Author notes
Quote used for inspiration in this write:
When we fall in love, our heart turns into a child's heart but.... Unknown
thank you very much for reading and commenting on my writing. it is apprecitated deeply.
(ps-if you know where my heart and soul are hidden, please draw me a map so that i can return my body to them!)
A contest entry
- When we fell in love.. by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended July 3, 2008, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wonderful Poem
I really love the way thing are expressed in this poem you done such a wonderful job. I love your work and the way you put your heart and soul into them I am sorry for what you went through but I think deep down in your self you know where your heart and soul really are. Anyhow your work is wonderful so inspiring I really enjoyed it.
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A touching story!
Well written.So sad and so much love languishing. A heartrending tale of love lost. So sorry for your loss!
Good luck in the contest,
Regards,
Jennifer
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We sometimes find those who steal our hearts and never return them, no matter if they remain with us or not. Hard to live like this, but we can only hope for better times, when we will learn to love anew and leave the past behind.
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Yes sometimes it is true my friend..you have described the truth of this love....well done..my thanks for such a touching entry in my contest...
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i would like to thank you very much for the gold in this contest. it has been a while since i've won a contest so i was pleasantly surprised this morning to find this. thank you for hosting. viyanna rosemarie
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Often love hurts. Soul searching is never easy. I still havn't found mine either. Maybe dear sister we both needs two maps. Wow, impressive write! They always seem to find their way quicker than us. Sucks!
~Sie
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