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Degradations Expression

Pain could not be exasperated on the canvas………………………………………………………

expression could
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Bathing in paint/rolling/swimming/ ....orgasming.....

Slathering each and every tendril of body hair, pubic hair, flesh,
              + under her eyelids

          Inhaling
into her nasal cavity, lungs, swallowing

Flopping
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                Sucking it into the folds of her vagina

              ################################################    Pulling it up her ass hole


Hurling herself onto the canvas and expelling all of her internal mediums of expression
(vomiting, shitting, queefing, exhaling, and crying out all of the paint)

                            beating herself against her art, her bodily fluids mixing with the paint, and stamping her body’s silhouette onto the painting


Blood splattered


THE STENCH OF THE PAINTINGS MEANING HUNG IN THE AIR

Author notes

prompt #4

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Comments


  • Chainsaw
    June 21, 2008

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    Oh my. Pornographic in every sense of the word. It's luxuriously over the top and vulgar. Thanks for entering this.


  • Blood Slurpie
    June 19, 2008
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    this i fucking beautiful, man.
    no but really, one of the best ideas i've ever read in a poem.


  • David. Enjoy.
    June 19, 2008
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    Ew. :3