Golden morning mist,
kisses, mornings sweet lips.
Dried summer days heat,
with juicy waves of sweat.
Succulent, peach coloured dusk's.
Luscious sunset, reigns supreme.
Afternoon breeze, brings our relief,
tantalized, by rose flavoured wine.
A contest entry
- Favorite Things by Pamela A Lamppa.
1200 points, ended July 3, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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a nice, brief poem, interesting rhyme.
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thanks
good to see you enjoyed
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ahhhh the build up to the tantalizing rose flavored wine. I did like that very much. Good job with brevity here. Nice work and a lovely entry. Best of luck in the judging. ~Pamela
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This one calls to the soul in soft perfume...
you bring alot to the palette here,
a vision of scent and taste and sky glory.
Blue
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wow thanks blue
im glad you enjoyed
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Mist on morning's lips in the heat of summer, followed by the peach colored dusk and rose flavored wine - definitely a summer's delight.
Marlene
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