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[ Cresting thunder ]

Cresting thunder
Streaming through brazen heaven
Illuminating sky mirror a thousand pieces
Trepid lighting forking, profound, regal, setting aflame all.
Wondrous and majestic.

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  • ennovy silver member
    June 19, 2008

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    Sire 'tis a new in syllable count, now edit and center the poem...to give thy cinquain its form...I adored this one on nature, left m'lady in awe of the storm......excellent write... Novy