It all started when we met at a party
I heard a voice say we would never be parted
I looked in your eye and saw something there
dont worry it is only a tiny hair
Five months later I am so in love with you
I even put up with the stupid things you do
One day you got down on one knee and said
"Will you marry me and live a life of misery"
"ok" I said and stuck out my hand the
ring you put on must have been found in the sand
Eventually you left me headed on a cruise
ship to Maui I tried to cross the ocean for
you but started to sink so now I'm screwed
All I could think about while I sinking
was how happy you'd be with my life insurance policy
A figure desended down to the waters and
brought me back up to a helicopter
I finally found my soul mate I can't
wait to get well so we can go on a date
A contest entry
- MY FIRST CONTEST--MAKE ME PEE MY PANTS. JOIN IN THE FUN by echo-ink.
600 points, ended June 24, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
This is Not a true story :0
Comments
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cute and clever!
kudos
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Oh my goodness
Instant amnesia haha this was great
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This is a very pretty poem. You made me smile broadly. Congratulations and best of luck in the contest.
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This was a cute story, and it made me smile.I'm dropping my life insurance, Yessa!!!
Thanks for entering my contest, and good luck . x -
Interesting and amusing
I liked it, fresh and fun.
wolf
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I had to read the last stanza twice. I loved it! Everyone needs that person to save them from their troubles. I can't wait to meet that person. This keeps you wondering and visualizing through the entire poem and it ends perfectly.
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This is interesting and funny. Good job.
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Ooooo Kayyyyyy I'm not sure what to think. It's a bit wandering... I'm assuming that your saviour is not your husband... (They seldom are
) So I'm left with a.... confession? .... fantasy? I enjoyed it but I am scratching my heard a bit (and with my receding hair line, that's not a good thing 
)
Ken
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