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Carnal Proxy

The lackluster of tiny intentions sets the sky on fire,
Mocking the corpses of antiquated dreams
De-evolving I count to ten,
Reverberating in the rhythm of acquiescence.

 

Vacillating between patched flaws and cryptic affectation,
The heavens shudder, crackling in morbid superiority,

 

I collapse inside.

 

Liquid gauze facilitates my wit,
Lynching carnal deeds with putrid ardor,

 

I am desensitized.

 

Staggering downward,
Implicit needs scorch writhing tongues,
Demanding compensations; quintessence in nature,

 

I am left almost empty.

 

The dancing hues of diminutive desires breed, rearing parasitic ambiguity.
Extinguishing disparagements of effervescing auras flicker and die,
Smothering the flames of distinctness amid a haze of audacity,
Casting away the last shredded ounce

of pretense,


I die once more.

Author notes

We sort of meshed:

"I myself am made entirely of flaws, stitched together with good intentions."
Augusten Burroughs

and

"Perhaps when we find ourselves wanting everything, it is because we are dangerously close to wanting nothing."
Sylvia Plath



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