Such beauty,
wonder,
so many
possibilitys.
A single thing
to me to make the
world of differece.
What I see on every
peice of my most
wonderous music.
Such beauty in
it's form in
some's eyes,
may not understand
or appreciate it's
greatness in others.
My mark of me...
Author notes
Love (representing whatever love you may have)
Friendship (for the appreciation you have toward a close friend)
Peace (peace over the war)
Poetry (ap, insperation)
Creative (artistic in any way)
Unique (different from the rest)
Sing (the love for the art of singing)
Music (for the love of music)
A contest entry
- Charm me Agian by peridotPixi.
450 points, ended June 27, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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i really like your take on the prompt, i like how it represents you, i suck at reading music and cold only play whole notes if my life depended on it, you must be a tallented musision, i know you are a great writer, keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy
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thank you so much for commenting but actualy i'm not realy a talented musision, not realy a musision at all. im a singer but i can't realy read music. its kinda weird, when my teacher starts playing the piano and i look at the music i just know what to do, if you layed out a piece of music and told me to explain everything on it i wouldn't have much to tell you, kinda weird i know, but thank you for the compliments and commenting on my poem i greatly appreciate it
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I like this, its very simple but complex. Like you'd have to read btwn the lines to get an indepth understanding. Very nice!
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thank you for commenting
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This is a lovely poem just a few typos possibilitys =possibilities, differece= difference, peice= piece other than that wonderful.
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could you put your list of charms in your ANs so we could still choose one if we wanted TY ~Amy
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