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I Tried

I tried to be your angel
atleast i was your friend.

I tried to be your love
atleast i could pretend

I tried to be there for you
this one i could do

I tried to say i love you
and ill always be there for you

I tried to let it out
the way i feel inside

I tried to tell you everything
specially when you cried.

I tried to be your shoulder
your supporter and your friend

I tried to be your everything
forever and till the end

I tried not to worry you
said i was ok, but i lied

Im trying to say i love you
but it's to late because i died.



-Courtesy of Stephen H. Mackey

First poem.

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  • queen Moderators member
    June 21, 2008

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    Welcome To All Poetry

    Hi stev3m

    Its never to late to say I love you this is a good poem I hope you find all the happiness life has to offer Poetry is a release for the soul
    Please keep writing, reading and commenting
    Barbara
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  • Dreamana
    June 19, 2008

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    These sound like words despairing of a relationship that went sour. Poetry is a great way to let out those hurts, as I well know. Welcome to AP.