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Omg! Why?!

Its tugging on my heartstrings
making me dance
I have no choice in the matter of love
especially when it comes
to loving her

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Once again I apologize 4 marking this as adult, but my heart beats and feels something 4 a girl that I don't really want non-members 2 know about. Especially my dad and my sweet, who do not have memberships 2 this site, but visit regularly. I'll tell them when the time comes. But no sooner...
06/19/2008

Say What You Want, If it's hurtful u'll be ignored

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    June 20, 2008
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    i got no hurtful words to this poem i can just say, keep it flowing my friend


  • jacbgd2 gold member
    June 19, 2008

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    What are you expecting from people?????  Why would anyone say anything to hurt you about this piece???? Things happen in our lives that you can't understand and I'm sure that's what happened to you in this situation!! Judging you is not my job nor will I ever do this to anyone... I am no where near a picture perfect person and guess what, nobody else is either.... Not even your dad or your sweety!!!!! I would not change anything in this piece!!! This is yours!!! If you made any changes to suite me or someone else then it would not be truly yours, would it???? I like it as is!!!! You are a great niece no matter who you love!!!!