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I give in totally to trust
in Father of the Heavens high above
and not one hint of fear remains.
I am deserving of this goodness
wrapped in kindness and friendship
and I believe that now with all my heart.
As planets revolved
and windchimes blew music of the spheres
two hands brushed and touched
and two companion souls bowed introduction
Softened loving hearts
opened now to endless possibilities
beat a comforting rhythm.

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  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    September 3

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    Inspiring poem about God's goodness and provision of a life partner. I love the comforting lines in this piece, especially "Wrapped in kindness and friendship" and "beat a comforting rhythm." So lovely. Just what I need right now.


  • Arkbear gold member
    August 5
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    Hi Kenlo Ann ~

    Your Faith shines through in this lovely write.....each line is a testimony of how you perceive God ~

     

    I love your 4th line......as we are deserving.....only satan will tell you different ~

     

    Endless possibilities....wow....can you imagine??!!

     

    God bless you,

     

    Bear ~

    Thank you for sending blessings of return to the Group


    • Star Shine gold member
      August 5
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      Bear, thank you for reading and for the thoughtful comment! Indeed we must often learn to believe in our own worth as children of God.

  • shepherd23 silver member
    June 19

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    "endless possibilities"
    It is a blessing that God is able to inspire us to endless possibilities...
    nice poem


  • Rovingone gold member
    June 19

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    Nice poem.
    windchimes blew music to the spheres
    two hands bushed and touched
    and two companmion souls bowed introduction
    softened loving hearts
    opened now to endless possibilities
    beat comforting rhythm.

    poignant true words.

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