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Enslaved

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Holding me in the palm of your hand

beautiful man in my life you hold me

within your enslavement of my love

for you.

 

Where is it you wish to take me in this

world of yours? I will follow you in every

place you go to, you deserve so much 

better then I, but you chose me.

 

I am honored with the touch of your love

in my hearts beating pulse, I would miss

you if you were no longer there, I feel  you

next to me in this world of love.

 

So much better then I is the one you spend

all eternity but I will always be enslaved by

the love that I feel for you in this world of

mine.

 

Hold me in the palm of your hand, make me

yours to hold enslave forevermore, don't let

me go even though you belong to her, I will

be whatever it is you want of me.

 

Singing in my heart is what I feel when I am

with you, truly holding my love in the palms

of the red heart beating discord, will you throw

me away once you have her.

 

Honey, I want to feel your lips upon mine, taking

the pleasure of your presence, whispering the

lovers tune upon your sweet rapture, hearing

your voice say my name, you enslave me. 

 

 

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Abariel Ravox


I really am not sure that I like this one but then it has been a long time since I have written one that I did like. I hope this is what you were looking for

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  • vjlvenus
    June 26, 2008
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    wow

    this was great! i could feel the emotion with every word!


  • Lucian Valcor
    June 19, 2008

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    this is awesome abariel i really enjoyed it almost as though i could feel your emotions when I read it

    Lucian"


  • Nikki Rowles
    June 19, 2008

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    so far it's my favorite...I can relate to this one...the only one so far that I can....which for this contest is a very good thing...and Ilove the picture...Thank you
    Dhrace..


  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    June 19, 2008

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    aww this is beautiful,
    i love this poem babe,
    its simply beautiful and the emtions your capture are wow! all my love,
    kitty xxx