Death Garage
By: D Saul So Sexy
Sleep is the cousin of death
Its like when I turn the t v set on
And get a taste of the world news
I see the destruction of more lies,
I see that a kid just got shot enjoying
There life. Sleep is the cousin of death
Like I can be Cadillacing with my boyz
And next thing I know they stinking in
Their garage. Sleep is the cousin of death
So I suggest you sleep with your eyes open.
Author notes
3. Sleep is the cousin of death
Death Garage
A contest entry
- B-Tha-1DA's PIF by B Tha Revolution.
475 points, ended June 20, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Forgive Me
Comments
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this was different, not quite sure that i understand this completely, can you elaborate. sleep is next to death in some ways, atleast we wake up
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you whooped my ass with this poem here boy! but it was well deserved i loved this i think you did a very great excellent job
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Whoa!!! Very powerful statement here
Excellent profound message,
And wooo hooo... Congrats on the shiney golden beauty
Delila
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thanks sweetness
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shit i love this so deep my god i knew that u were the best
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thats smiley you make ya boi feel good huh
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you no, it any thing else ?
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D E E P &
thought provoking pen you have here 'D'.
Stopping by to see how you been and catching up on some Poetry from my favs.
Wishing you well
-ephiphany
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thanks ga for readin this
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i like this, it's real and honest, and yet poeticly ingaging.
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WOW LOVE THIS GOOD BEST OF LUCK IN THE CONTEST
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thanks beautiful
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Hey that shit is the truth. Loved the emotion in your words ba. Real write keep it that way
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thanks ga see i like ur stank thoughts on thangs just smell so good
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