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Just Imagine


“My Daughter Dear” if I could be there,
I would gladly be your crutch.
I would walk you through a field of soft daisy’s
Gently letting your foot touch.
Can you feel it?

“My Daughter dear” if I could be there,
I would paint the world in radiant pastels.
There would be beautiful colors everywhere.
Can you see it?

“My daughter Dear” if I could be there,
I would make you a flower garden.
With the sweet smell of elegant perfume.
Can you smell it?

“My Daughter Dear” if I could be there,
I would be like a glistening Angel
Watching over you.
Can you feel me?

“My Daughter Dear” if I could be there,
I would talk about the great times we have shared.
There would be happiness everywhere.
Are you listening?

“My Daughter Dear” I Know we are miles apart ,
But just imagine like when you were a child,
Me there with you, because I love you
with all my heart.




Hope this makes you feel better.







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Written For my Daughter CreatiosnfromHeart
I love you Susan Heart soul and all of me.

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  • storiesuntold
    June 20, 2008
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    Very loving write

    So sweet this is and heart felt keep up the good work


  • CountryCousin
    June 20, 2008
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    I still like it.

    I still like this one.


  • CountryCousin
    June 20, 2008

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    A true mother.

    This is a true piece written with motherly love. I think that you are indeed there with her. This is more than spiritual it is really lovely.


  • alwaysapartofme
    June 19, 2008

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    Awww it is really sweet! You are a good mom! I loved it and it really showed that you love her and care for her so much! Awesome job loved the whole thing!


  • MysticalRayne
    June 19, 2008

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    Ohhhhhhhh Joy this is beautiful and from reading this your love for Susan flows right through, your words are perfectly chosen making this piece very heartfelt. Wonderful job


  • creationsfromheart
    June 19, 2008

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    MOM, I love this and yes it does make me feel better even more so it makes me feel very loved, you done wonderful on this write, and touched my heart deeply, Don't think I am just saying I love this because you are my mom and it is the nice thing to do... Because even if you were not my Mom I sure would be envious of your daughter, I love you so very much and I truly am glad God picked you for me Love heart soul and all of me

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