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Claiming the Acorn

Little nut you are
fallen from your tree
to carry on to me

You lie there
just in my path
fruit of an oak sea

I reach to lift you
place you in my pocket
for patience to reside

A gift of life
a companionship inside

Author notes

~peace sign~

~wild daisy~

~camera~

~open book~

~crow~

~hershey kiss~ (taken)

~hourglass~

~thistle~



Pic: http://terra.mpc.edu/acorn/acorn2.jpg

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  • peridotPixi
    June 27, 2008

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    i really like this picture it goes well with the poem and the nice choice of your backgound i like how the acorn is a symbol of life keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy


  • peridotPixi
    June 24, 2008
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    I'm claiming your hershey kiss, i hope i can come up with something for it, lol ~Amy


  • peridotPixi
    June 19, 2008
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    i like your hour glass and your thistle, thank you for you entry, have fun