Roots in etiquette's; dazzled, gushing, dominated,
a protocol offending in every blade of grassy life,
just the tip of a magnet admirable, elusive, grave;
as a zephyr approaching, teasing on a target of muses.
By the way a gaze haze an insight, sometimes tragic,
half-hogshead, embarrassing, our reality with difference,
to make way for a scarcity of feelings rather interrupted,
will not benefit an usual fanfare in absence of attention.
Back stabbing all men to women, even, in legend, snake or apple,
regretted more often, to learn earlier to accompany with thoughts.
Author notes
~spiritualangel~
Prompt: 5. Backstabbing etiquette.
A contest entry
- PIF PROMPT CONTEST by penman.
700 points, ended June 20, 2008, 10 entries
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Wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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