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Bucking Bronco

Man you used to ride me
Hold on til you were spent
But lately love has shrivelled
Have you found some other wench?

You used to come inside me
Warm trickles down my thighs
Now all you do is grab my tits
Whilst I self-satisfy

That is not enough
You don't love me
Like the first time that we fucked
Think you're above me?
I'm your bronco
Watch me buck
Put your tongue inside
And suck




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  • Mercury Rising
    June 27

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    Jesus, I just got up this morning, and I wasn't prepared for a blast of heat. Very direct and effective and a pleasure to read.

  • wendymolly
    July 15, 2008

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    Yes!

    More women need to be as open about their sexuality these days. more open to their partners as well. Finally! someone came out and said what is really on their mind. truth is a freedom! take care and God bless,
    ~pithyAplomB.


    • BabyBun silver member
      July 20, 2008
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      Thanks so much for commenting on my poems - much appreciated!


  • The Voice of Victory
    July 2, 2008

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    Think you're above me?
    I'm your bronco
    Watch me buck
    Put your tongue inside
    And suck

    .............
    Good Write Baby Bun. And its one hell on a one liner.....


  • Mat Larkin
    June 28, 2008

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    wow....

    ummm..I gotta go now. But nice write. Well, not nice, but amazing and memorable. And a reminder that women are as sexual as men..and apparently can write about it with equal vigour, passion, and ....and..and...

    Bravo as usual....

    Mat


  • Emerald Dog
    June 21, 2008

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    Hot Licks!

    I have no idea how I arrived at your page - but I'm glad I did. Looking at you/reading your words leads me to believe that whoever this is written about must have decided to bat for the other side. Now move over rover ..... !


  • quantumsurveyor
    June 20, 2008

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    It's been a long time for me (LOL) Damned old age. But I have difficulty with the tongue inside and the suck, I think it would vanish down his throat - is that what you meant/wanted??? Sensual or what? Erotic and hot!!!


    • BabyBun silver member
      June 20, 2008
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      Er (blush) I meant the tongue inside me! Glad you liked it!¬


  • enitsirhC
    June 19, 2008
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    This is amazing!
    Best of luck in the contest!!!

  • jaie2007
    June 19, 2008

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    Oh Damn!!!!! That's so hot!!!!

    You're a beautiful woman and obviously a very sensual one! This poem got me all juicy inside! It's been a couple of weeks since I had some! I'll definitely put this piece in my memory banks. It's a lyrical aphrodisiac. They say English women do it best anyway!!!


  • faderman1959
    June 19, 2008

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    That man is a fool! Anyone who can write something this hot should never be ignored! Dump him! This was an excellent rant!

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