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Footprints on the sand

Our footprints imprinted on the sand
Got washed away by crashing waves

Just like the moments we spent together
That drifted away, together with you

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  • limechic
    June 21, 2008
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    so short and yet so meaningful

    love it


  • marlene47 silver member
    June 21, 2008

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    Like the binding connection between the footprints and the memories all washed away with the other you're remembering.
    Thank you for your impressionable entry.
    Marlene


  • Celtic Legend
    June 19, 2008
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    very good! short and powerful. nice work!

  • Fitz1901
    June 19, 2008
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    Too say so much with such a few lines is a talent I am deeply jealous of.

    Great poem


  • checkmate
    June 19, 2008

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    short, sweet and powerful. loved it. loved it. loved it. especially how you connected everything together

    awesome!!!!!!

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