Fading into the scenery
my heart dissolves
Blending into the background
so you can no longer see my pain
Forever lost in my own reality
becoming one with my surroundings
Deep inside myself
searching my soul
Author notes
Credit Artist:
Leaf~ by dogeatdog5 [Collected from Devianart]
In a list
A contest entry
- Semi-Quickie; [Sensual] Picture Prompt # 2 by perfectsunset.
600 points, ended July 21, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wow; original take on the prompt. I never thought of it from his own personal point of view. I was expecting mainly sensual writes. But you have take it to new levels. Thanks for making me see this in a new perspective. You truly brought the picture to life brilliantly. Loved this! Beautiful write!
Best of luck & thanks for entering
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Thank you
Thank you so much. The idea just sort of jumped out of the picture at me
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Lost within ones on reality, blending in so not to be seen,searching my soul and coming up empty...has a feeling of loneliness about it...enjoyable read
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Thank you
Thank you for your wonderful comment. I think we all feel this way sometimes but lately I feel it more
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i love this.... i feel like this all the time... you write sooo well... i love it... thanks for sharing and goood lick in contst....!!!!!!!!
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luck !
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Thank you
Thank you so much, i feel like this too, like everything is going on around me but i am all alone
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