We shared such love
that night, creating
our first child.
Patience, the virtue
while this gift
grows inside.
You’re my everything,
I cannot wait for all
this journey, shall bring..
Author notes
Allthough this may be simple worded.....those close to me and well others etc, know my partner and I are trying for a baby right now..So it was not hard to be inspired by such a wonderful, beautiful picture...That picture is my wish
and my words truly come from my heart..
In a list
A contest entry
- hey this is my first quickie by Aliya Abbas.
300 points, ended June 29, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Its a beautiful concept.
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The waiting will make the moment that much more special when it happens. Loved your heart behind this sis! Such an easy flow and gentleness that I just loved. Hope your wish is granted very soon!
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Thanx Bro...I hope soon too hehehe
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Beautiful in it's heartfelt words sis!!! Says all it needs to say!
Love you!
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Lov U too sis Thanks
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lol - believe it or not, I saw her as looking outside with worry thinking how she could protect her little one for the rest of his/her life against all the evils of the world (that's one my my major worries!)
lovely words here (even though it's simple worded lol!)
always believe that you will get what you need when you need it ...
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Thank you
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All the best for your would be child dear. may it come very soon in your life to increase your happiness by many folds.
the poem is very cute. thanx for entering. -
Lovely feel to this... such happiness and hope... Well done (and good luck
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Ken
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awww I want a baby cousin hehe and you should name it char
and then post her to me..oh wait make sure its a girl 
love you sissy lol
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Waiting seems to be so long yet when I look back on my children time never stood still for too long... This journey of life begins and you change from being your own person to being known as someones mum....standing there at the school gate Excellent take on the prompt....hope you get your wish soon. Good luck in this contest.
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