Perfection~ Senryu chain with seven links
The connection comes
The evolution takes place
I become eighteen
A Vestal Virgin
In love with a curly boy
Who captures my heart
So sweet perfection
Reveals itself in young love’s
Pristine purity
Your hug is so sweet
Your hand lingers on my back
Still felt afterwards
The bliss is fleeting
lasting for just one heartbeat
Yet you're always here
In these quick moments
Joys get stored in memories
Savored forever
Then we say goodbye
Now my bowl’s singing
Meditation’s song
Author notes
To mia Italiano with love!
He gave me a singing bowl from
Tibet and then he left one more time.
A contest entry
- When we fell in love.. by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended July 3, 2008, 15 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Yes your warmness of love is poured here in the every word..ah..i can fel the love around...well done..my thanks for such a wonderful entry in my contest...
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Dear PDK
You make my heart light and my head as well!
Thank you for making me feel like a poet!
God Bless You!
Jane
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