True love comes
with a meeting of souls,
the outer shell
merely the vessel.
Joined as one
with the fruit of their unity,
there is tender calm
in spiritual attraction.
Author notes
Photo is Prompt (30 words exactly)
In a list
A contest entry
- YOU THINK YOU ARE HIP TO LOVING LARGE? 30 words - #85- by Roaddog Wolf.
475 points, ended June 23, 2008, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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really liked the first stanza, so very true, good write
thank you for entering and good luck in the contest
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Excellent
A wonderful creation. So very well expressed for 30 words. best of luck in the contest.
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I like your word choices for this photo - soul, shell, vessel, joined as one, unity, calm and their spiritual attraction. Your title is perfect too. Gently flows from "calm, tender" knowing.
A great entry on meaning of true love.
Marlene -
Aww that is just precious hun!! So true of humans too! Oh to have that tender calm!!
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An excellent poem in which you found a truth.
Beautifully written.
John -
awww. A great piece that melds beautifully with the picture. Good Luck. Juls
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