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Flies Away

A million fluttering butterflies
Tickling my stomach inside-out.
My smile crooked to one side;
The side of shyness & awkwardness.

Your stare makes me blush,
& hot flushes of caramel love
Rushes to my cheeks.
I turn away to hide a smile.

Fantasies come true.
Impish cupid arrows got the best of me.
I start to chase for that
Beautiful something at the end
Of that rainbow

Which didn't exist once.

Maturity flies away,

Reason disappears conveniently,
When you're in love.

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  • nature mithya
    July 3, 2008
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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    June 22, 2008

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    I can see the innocency of the love while describing the prompt by you...I love it...well done..my thanks for such a wise entry in my contest...