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Lifes shore

Storms have come and gone
along the shores
of my life.

Then the sun
begins to peak
above the horizon.

Giving us
a renewed hope
so we may go on.

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    July 14, 2008
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    Lovely write here

    It flows perfectly and with the pic its heavenly I so love the beach and the sunsets


  • marlene47 silver member
    June 21, 2008

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    Like the take of life's shore and the passing storms with its ever renewing hope. Thank you for your entry and its gentle lapping at the fundamental issues in life.
    Marlene


  • Nicada silver member
    June 20, 2008

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    This is a soothing and beautiful write. It fits well with the picture prompt. There is so much truth and wisdom in your words. Nice! Good luck to you in the contest. Blessings, Patty


  • Sandygram silver member
    June 20, 2008

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    Lovely Write!!!

    Good Morning, You have penned a beautiful poem with stunning imagery to capture the essence of the picture. A pleasure to read this morning. Thank you for sharing your talents. You take care.

    Bless You
    Sandy


  • Arizona Sunset
    June 20, 2008

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    Simple sweet and perfect find the correct path and follow it...s to you ~blessings always~ Trisha

  • storiesuntold gold member
    June 19, 2008

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    Beautiful write

    So true as our life evolves and we as the director often we neglect the outcome of our actions and then when we come to the realizaton of the problem we pull ourselves back on track


  • PoeticSymphony
    June 19, 2008

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    Really simple yet incredible write. really enjoyed it. good luck in your future poetry.
    all the best
    lOVE, PEACE AND CHICKEN GREACE XX

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