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Don't take him

Goddess please no please
Don't take him from me

I've only just found him
Don't let him leave me!

You've cursed my every step
Before him!

You've put me thrue
Test after test

Godess don't let them find Him
Let them get me instead!

An evil he has done
Let the punishment fall on me!

I couldn't breath if
They killed him

I couldn't...Please!

Author notes

My huspand is an ex drug addict and the dealers are looking to kill him. I just hope we have ran far enough. I doubt it though Godess give me strength.

~*~*~papercutangel86~*~*~

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  • Sandygram
    June 24, 2008

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    Heartfelt Poem

    A powerful poem. I can feel the fear in your words. I am so sorry you have to live under this dark shadow. I shall keep you both in my prayers. Thsnk you for sharing your heartfelt poem.

    Blessings,
    Sandy


  • Nikki Rowles
    June 19, 2008
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    wow...it's deep and it's touching, but as it stands...not something can relate to...I wishyou luck in staying far away from them...let teh goddess bless you both, and it is a good poem, but it hasn't captured me or enslaved my soul...sorry
    Blessed Be
    Dhrace