Black eyes meet sapphires,
Bodies intertwine within each other.
Your feather light touches spark,
and leaves me to tremble in your presence.
Growing weak, dieing....
Author notes
25 words exactly
Prompt.
The meeting of two personalities
is like the contact of two chemical substances:
if there is any reaction, both are transformed.
Carl Jung (1875 - 1961)
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF Qoute on Love by Riftkin.
625 points, ended June 20, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What to do in an insane world?
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well deserved gold. such vivid image, it stands off the "page".
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I love this poem, thank you for entering my contest best of luck to you Riftkin
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dont die with out me hun.... we need each other..... hugs... great poem altho sad.... thanks for sharing this and good luck in contest...!
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Oh sister o mine
Geez went out and found some eye's did ya! Lol great write, one thing. Take the s off of leaves and just have it leave... reads easier that way. Unless you planned other wise then even more kudos to ya!!! -
beautifully written and i love the way you have used the background and made it fit with the words. there is something deep and unique about the wording for this piece and it is gripping. well done with this piece sis and keep writing and inspiring other poets on the site
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