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With Grace

Feel you move,dancing
makes me smile.

Just between us babe
am really scared.

I'll give you life
together we will grow.

Love's bonding unconditionally
with grace from above.

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  • penman gold member
    February 28
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    Excellent

    What a great creation. So very deserving of the gold. Congratulations.


  • Mirthryl
    September 4, 2008

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    Good title. I think we all need help beyond ourselves at times as parents. Beautiful first lines, love the active "move, dancing" and "smile." True love is "unconditional," and definitely, "together we will grow." You targeted in on some great aspects of parenthood. Enjoyable write.


  • Roaddog Wolf gold member
    July 25, 2008

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    something tells me that

    that this is something a female would understand than men would so I feel like it was a look inside the feeling of a woman that a man doesn't often see, good write


  • Rose Angel gold member
    June 21, 2008

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    How well you share the feelings between a mother and her child in the womb. Beautiful imagery! A wonderful write!"


  • Walking shadow
    June 19, 2008

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    Another mook moment in history

    I am not a dad, I do not know what it is like to have to help a mother prepare for birth. This piece is pretty awesome. Great job.

  • crimsondew
    June 19, 2008
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    Unconditionally beautiful sentiments here..
    All the best!


  • Cannonsfire gold member
    June 19, 2008
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    C


  • Aliya Abbas
    June 19, 2008

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    this is just beautiful. as beautiful is the feeling of being pregnant. which line i like most? i should say it is very hard to point out. every line speaks oceans. thanx for entering.

  • fortyninereasons gold member
    June 19, 2008
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    A mother loves unconditionally. Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful piece. Juls


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    June 19, 2008

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    oh what a precious write about motherhood. Yes it sure can be scary but that unconditional love can move mountains.
    This is perfect for the picture.
    All the best with this
    Gaylene

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