You come to me
whispers in the night
sweet words of lust filled desires
take away my breath
arouse the wanting need in us.
Lips pressing
in passionate melts
feeling hot intensity
of amorous pleasure.
You come to me
naked flesh lingering touches of you
eyes locked into the flames of fire
burning between …..come.
Author notes
Was to be for a contest http://allpoetry.com/contest/2410361
Unknown artist taken from the prompt on the above contest.....I thank the host for the inspiration.
Please tell me what you think
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Just a tad bit warm
this one is ....."naked flesh lingering touches of you
eyes locked into the flames of fire" flames of fire, yep good write
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Excellent
Fabulous creation so very well worded. Thank you for sharing
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Beautiful piece. Trying to think of more to say, but I can't come up with any critique. Guess that's a good thing
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Oh wow this is a very sensual number!
Wonderful imagery you have created with your words.
Sorry you missed out!
Thanks for sharing
gaylene
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oh yeah...now thats what I'm talking about! Love, C
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