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After Party: Alone

Trashed ice
yawns back
from below

dry smoke
coyly curls
about the roof and shingles
oblivious

a parade of
fantastic
nothings

copy
onto each fresh puddle
intoning automatically
a neighbors' television
unforgiven

their concrete bed
sits deeper

under brimming teens
who slosh awkwardly
into nearby shrubs
exceeded

clouds smoulder
beyond this canopy
reach

helplessly for
their own ends via
another unseen side

of earth's base breast,
suckling saplings

root into baby
pine within

such teeming needles
blinks a firefly
bravely on

against 

 

Night,

submerged and sinking.

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  • minicooper
    June 19, 2008

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    w0w

    wonderful...LOVE the description. exactly what i asked for. bravo! i especially love the line "coyly curls"...gives me chills!! good luck in the contest!!

    God bless,
    ~cooper~


  • Chet W.
    June 19, 2008

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    well, you will should definitely win that contest. These descriptions are ridiculuosly amazing and feel so real. Amazing job