blankets folded
in multi-coloured love
sighing your breath
into my heart
I dance
on daydreams
longing for you to feed
off my life
and kisses...
I carry my womanhood
softly
Author notes
picture prompt
A contest entry
- hey this is my first quickie by Aliya Abbas.
300 points, ended June 29, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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that shows how blessed is womanhood...nice poem
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wow what a n awesome job you have done here... thanks for sharing this with me and gooooooood luck in contest....! love the write and the pic....!
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wow mummy you have taken the prompt amazigly and with such descriptive words you have described something that is so beautifully expressed.well done and best of luck
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Aww..very beautiful dear...just beautiful...
All the best!
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Excellent take on the prompt ..... what can i say that you have not expressed already.
Good luck in this contest.
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And although your poem seems like forgetting the pride of the said womanhood, this is beautiful. I'm only your AP son, but this is something I'd be proud of if you really had me in your womb.
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wow that was wonderful.
I dance
on daydreams
longing for you to feed
off my life
and kisses...
i love these thoughts of yours.
thanx for entering -
Aww this was so beautifully and deeply touching. Loved how you ended it sweetly with
"I carry my womanhood softly"
Such a lovely read, and sincere write.
Best of luck!
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