Holding you
beneath my heart,now
I will hold you
in my heart
for a lifetime.
A contest entry
- hey this is my first quickie by Aliya Abbas.
300 points, ended June 29, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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aww this is really beautiful.. I really like the flow of this and the imagery was really sweet.. best of luck!!
Angel
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There is truly is nothing better than caring your child beneath your heart....except being able to finally hold them in your arms!!! This was beautiful!! Very well done and best wishes
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The title says it all in that single word motherhood is unconditional love no payments due or accounts to be settled....last a lifetime just as you say. In so few words the message is loud and clear Excellent take on the prompt .... Thank you. Good luck in the contest.
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Brief but mother's love writ all over it...Well done..
All the best!
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All mothers do, don't they? Beautiful, thoughtful rendition. Good luck in the contest.
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Awww
this is so sweet. I have 2 kinds, and despite being away from them, always hold them close.
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very good poem. like it.
thanx for entering.
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