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Don't Trust Vampires

I met a vampire
I fell in love
But he betreyed me
He said i love you
And will never give you up
Yet he did
I was goin to kill myself
But i didnt have to
He did it for me
He did by
Sticking his cold razor sharp teeth
Into my warm flesh
Ripping it to shreds
He let me stay on the floor
To wait for my last breathe of air
But i am still love him






(This didnt really happen but it felt like it and still feels like it)

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  • Spiritual Soul
    June 19, 2008

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    Welcome to Allpoetry!

    Hello!
    This was a very different poem, but I liked it. Falling in love with a vampire, very risky. Great write, Keep it up and welcome to the site!
    Blessings,
    ~Michaela~
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