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Forgotten Friend

I used to be able to see
Your beautiful eyes
Where did you go
Can you hear me cry

I used to love you
But now you're gone
You left me alone
Goodbye so long

My forgotten friend
This is for you
Do you even care
That I bleed for you

You left without a trace
A forgotten friend
You will remain nameless
Is this the end

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  • Firequeen
    June 19, 2008

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    This is sad and tragic.
    you did very well on the write and i thank you for entering my contest.
    Fire


  • mysticstorm gold member
    June 19, 2008

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    Very creative...a wonderful write full of deep emotions....sad and lonely feel to your words...
    Best!
    mystic