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A new life



Beautiful rounded tummy,
awaiting the dawn of a new day,
though pain will bring you into
this world..
My love will keep you safe.

A contest entry

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  • Angelflower
    June 29, 2008

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    aww.. this was short but beuatiful.. You brought out a lot of emotion and love from the picture.. You did a wonderful job.. best of luck..

    Angel


  • HonorablyFallen silver member
    June 19, 2008
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    wonderful

    It needs nothing more - Sarahlynn


  • HeavensDaughter
    June 19, 2008
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    I love it...beautifully expressed!


  • dustookie2
    June 19, 2008

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    This is a journey no one can tell you what it will be like to give birth we are all different and the experience is unique to each woman....i cannot speak of pain never really had any but we all have one common thread ........told both my children 'trust your mum' comes down to your last line You have captured so much emotion in so few words..nicely penned. Excellent take on the prompt...Good luck in the contest.


  • crimsondew
    June 19, 2008

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    Love how you played with love and pain going together...Well written..
    All the best in the contest!


  • Aliya Abbas
    June 18, 2008
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    a very good poem including both the people in the pic
    thanks for entering the contest

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