Mary's little lambs
Pulled lots of scams.
The song sounds so cheerful.
But the Truth is quite fearful.
They bit people's faces
And cheated in races.
You better watch your back
Or your butt will be home for that tack.
But the worst tipped that bucket
Full of juice straight from Nantucket.
"Tomorrow's dinner," says pops
"Will be some nice lamb chops!"
A contest entry
- I Need To Laugh! by Kathleen a Nazarene.
1200 points, ended June 20, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I think that if the sheep really are that bad then they really should be for tomorrow's dinner! Don't you think so? ahah of course youo think so.. you wrote this!!
wow.. I'm really out of it anywayz, Keep up the awesome writing!! This was funny!! 
hehe yay!
Alex -
Well, if the lambs are that horrible, than I think it's best if we have them for tomrorrow's dinner! Agree? well, of course you do! lol you wrote this poem! wow... I'm out of it! But i Like it and can obviously see why it got an HM! Keep up the awesome writing!!
Alex -
Still Judging!
Like the timing & clever rhyming! I think you need to correct some grammar. Hurry quick! I'm still thinking.
Thanks for your entry!
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on the line "they bit people faces," I think it needs to be "they bit people's faces."
But yeah... this was nicely done... a very cute poem. I'm kinda scared of that nursery rhyme now.
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