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Beautiful He - Rondeau

 

Beautiful he, who sits and stares,

Numbers dwindling, no one cares.

So brave the one, who shows no fear,

Wisdom he, as he sheds a tear.

Knowledge yours to become aware.

 

Loyalty his, can’t compare,

Spirit strong with bravery rare.

Sacred, we shall always revere.

Beautiful he.

 

Grace will die, when they disappear,

Such heartbreak will be so severe.

Destruction seen, moves to despair,

Loneliness felt, does bring a tear.

Now look and see, the Eagle there,

Beautiful he.

 

 

 

 

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Another writing assignment for refrain class.

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  • raggyann
    June 21, 2008
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    i agree this poem can be taken in so many ways i love it

  • hardeepb
    June 19, 2008

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    Sweet surrender

    This poem can be looked at in so many ways that I love it. Sometimes we will me a guy/girl in our lives that we feel like this about:

    "Grace will die, when they disappear,
    Such heartbreak will be so severe.
    Destruction seen, moves to despair,
    Loneliness felt, does bring a tear."

    And sometimes us humans that are lacking any sort of esteem or substance, wished that another person would view us like this; the pinnacle of greatness, love, beauty. Wonderful write, the Eagle is a symbol of so many thing. 8.5/10! Keep writing my friend!

    • freespirit51
      June 19, 2008
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      hardeepb

      Thanks for your wondeful comment. I am so glad you enjoyed it and that it touched you in many ways... Fell free to come back and read anytime..


  • ShaShay
    June 19, 2008

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    Excellent

    I love this. It was so evenly flowing and so beautiful in content. You did something to be proud of doing.


    • freespirit51
      June 19, 2008
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      NurseyPoo

      Thanks so much for your wonderful words. I am glad you enjoyed.


  • arafura gold member
    June 19, 2008
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    Beautiful He... Yes indeed! It will be a tragedy if they disapear. Excellent write my friend.

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