We arrive at the booth, tired from dancing
Sitting down, I put my arm around you; hold you close
Pour a drink for us both; straights shots of Goose
We cheers and celebrate a great night; swallow them down
I pour another two; but you’re good for now
My pole is still exposed, but under the table
Only you can see it; your hand reaches over to squeeze
I moan in pleasure as my eyes roll back; massaging
Staring out at the dance floor; life can’t get better
Stroking up and down as you sink into the cushioned booth
My arm around you reaches your breast; under your dress
Occasionally people would walk by and look; we didn’t stop
You kept stroking and grabbed a mixed drink
Slowly sipping casually; your hand is causing me to climax
But I’m holding it down as hard as I can
You drizzle a little of your drink on my shaft; a cooling sensation
You face slowly goes down kissing my pelvis, licking the drink
Such a tease; I begin to pulsate uncontrollably
You’re head comes up as you take a big swig
I see it’s still in your mouth as you give me a sexy wink
You go down back to my snake; take it in your mouth
It meets the liquor as you taste many flavours; ecstasy
Some trickles out your mouth down my shaft
My release is upon us; I can’t take it any longer
I climax in her mouth, pulsing for a whole 30 seconds
The bass from the music has me in a trance
She keeps sucking and doesn’t stop
Swallowing my juice mixed with vodka and cranberry
All at once, down her throat; she comes up and smiles
I reach over kissing her deeply; tasting the cranberry mostly
I yank her dress up enough to have her lower body exposed
As I kiss on her neck, my hand travels down in between her legs
I slowly begin to rub circles around her clitoris
Watching her head nod back, as if she was on drugs
Slowly grinding to the music as I slip two fingers inside
Leaned over making out, thrusting hard into her
I can hear her scream over the music since she’s so close
I feel her contracting heavily; I can’t move my fingers much
To make things worse, I take an ice cube from a nearby glass
And stick it inside her cave; I sit back on the cushion as my head goes down
I use my tongue forcefully with the ice to make her tremor
She begins to convulse as I suck on her nub; so sensitive
Without a moment’s notice, the ice cube shoots out
Along with her juice; as I lap it up with my tongue
Enjoying the taste of it all; dripping down my chin
Her legs wide open as other party goers can see under the table
She puts her hand on my crotch; with the eyes of fire
I wonder what comes next as that Usher song comes on…
A contest entry
- Turn Me On by NeverSayAddiction.
725 points, ended July 10, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Mmmmmm.... SEXY by Still single.
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525 points, ended September 2, 2008, 22 entries
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Part III in the works
Comments
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I liked it, yet I have a hard time with the easy climax
for the woman within the story. It does not happen that easy or that fast, and should be drawn out to really get idea of the real woman in this story. Now I know that some woman are eary, but most however are not and it takes a hell of a lot more then that. Look at how long the blow job lasted, then read the few lines for the woman!!!!!! NOT FAIR I SAY. I would paddle a man if that is all I got. lol
The detail is ok, but the more you get into smell, sounds, touch, textures your readers will fall into the read and maybe, maybe get off as well!
Keep it up, there is a good story here.
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Probubly the best one you've entered, although i think its more a matter of a good sexy story than exceptional writing. the last line is an anticlimax for such a long piece.
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Damn this is exciting. Now I want to go out and play. lol Definately even better than the first one. Keep it up. I absolutely can't wait for part 3.
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holy hell kid. lol this one made me wet to. what i wouldnt give for a night of dancing with you lol. cant wait for part three. keep up the good work.
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lol this is good...i like the ending...definitely sets up part 3...lots of action, lots happens, and nothing really...whats the word. normal i guess? lots of excitement, adventure, more risky business.
i approve =)
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