In the dark sky
A lovely smile,
Comforting each
Gloomy heart.
Spreading joy
everywhere,
Pain hidden inside
though.
A perfect example
For your child.
A complete message
For everyone.
Hardships fluctuate,
But you stand firm,
Like,
A lovely smile
In the dark sky.
Author notes
Angel
Radiant
Mirthful
Compassionate
Mettlesome
Ingenious
Elegant
Lotus
A contest entry
- Charm me Agian by peridotPixi.
450 points, ended June 27, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i love the smile in the dark sky, i love the beautiful picture you have used to help paint this beutiful poem, keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy
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Wonderful
Very well done. A terrific creation. Best of luck in the contest.
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thanx for appreciating the poem. thanx for the applause.
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i will be juding this charm contest on friday if you have time please finish your entry TY ~Amy
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Claimed!
Angel for me, please! -
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its all yours.
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i like the compassionate one these are wonderful charms im sure the represnet you well, thank you for the entry have fun
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thanx for the eppreciation.
and yes they do represent me as well but to some extent. i have chosen them exclusively for you after reading your page by which i came to know a little abt you n your life.
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