Can you see it?
It creeps along deserted halls,
It’s the dancing shadows on your bedroom walls.
Can you feel it?
It can make you sleepy, can be divine,
Any yet it might just send shivers of fear tingling up your spine.
Can you taste it?
It’s utterly bland,
the simple flavor of a firefly’s home,
a sinister plan.
Can you hear it when you’re alone,
smell it even,
as it creeps around,
closes you in?
Like a terrifying chase,
a warm embrace,
it covers you up,
chills you,
warms you.
It turns everything off,
sets the sparkling stars alight,
can you feel it?
The darkness of the night?
Comments
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Omg, Wow!
I loved it!
It sent cold chills up my spine!
Great job!
I don't think you need to change a thing..
It's perfect , although there are other critics out there, so i'm only one person. But i think you did a great job on this!!
wonderful!!
The Title even was good!
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