Watching butterflies dance
so softly,
so gently,
among fields of daisies,
She daydreams of yesterday...
and she weeps.
Missing the feathery touch of his kiss
brushing tenderly across her lips,
sorrow's tears fall longingly from her heart,
As petals drop from the flower...
He loves me,
He loves me not...
Author notes
pic prompt (50)words
A contest entry
- Semi Quickie Picture Prompt - PIF - by Reptile Lady by Reptile Lady.
700 points, ended June 20, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Upgrade Your Green Trophy by Nicada.
850 points, ended August 3, 2008, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Feelings At Present. by Poetryintheblood.
625 points, ended November 17, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank you for your most heartfelt entry, Josie
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This is a beautiful and sad poem. It is written very well, and I like the way you set it up. Very touching and heartfelt. Thanks for entering my contest. Blessings, Patty
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Congratulations on the well-Deserved award---Well Done
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Thank you!!
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Wonderful
Very creative and well expressed. A fabulous take on the prompt. Congratulations on the honorable mention.
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I appreciate your kindness, thank you so much.
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I think this poem should of won gold..But i was not judging it. I like the simpllicity and the flow of words expressing your love emotions of his memory!!
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I appreciate your very kind comment, thank you.
I'm glad you enjoyed it.. Thank you again!
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Beautiful
Full of memories and those emotions are felt
Love the flow used
Thank you for your entry and best wishes
Julie
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Thank you for HM. It was a great prompt.
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I think this is very touching. If a person has never lost someone they love, they will never understand how poignant it is. I love it. ~ Joyce
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Thank you so much for your kind comment. I'm glad you enjoyed this. I appreciate you reading and commenting.
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he loves me he loves me not... awwwwwwwwww great write but its sad...... sorry for the pain... stupid heart... oh sorry.. anway thanks for shairng this and good luck in contest.....!
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You're so sweet Michelle. Thank you dear. Too bad we can't turn our emotions off at times huh?
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Sigh.. I think many of us have been here!! Your writes always have such a gentleness about them that really speaks to the heart!
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Heyyyy stranger! Been missing you lately! Thank you for your lovely comment my dear. Hope you are well and happy.
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Heyy! I'm on holiday.. so a bit absent.. and I got a tummy bug been
9 times today! 
But it's a fast moving one .. lol
hope you are well and happy too hun!
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Oh no, so sorry you're ill. I'll send well wishes to you! Not nice to be sick while on vacation is it. And I'm well, thank you dear. Hope you feel much better SOON, and back with us, we miss you.
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Thanks hun! It's a quick moving one so hoepfully a box of birds in a couple of days
I miss everyone here too!
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A box of birds? That must be a kiwi thing lol But it sounds painful
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hehe it is a Kiwi thing.. means full of energy and flittering around.. lol.. weird I know!
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Well here's wishing you're a big box of birds in no time!! lol Yay!
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aww..this is so sad...
but i LOVED it
"As petals drop from the flower...
He loves me,
He loves me not...">>>the ending really hits hard!!!
so great!
best of luck in the contest!
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Thank you so much for your lovely comment. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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WOW! What a read this one is! It is easy to see the thoughts in this one! What a great job!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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Thank you sweetness. I struggled with this one, trying to get it how I wanted it to read. I'm glad you got into the thought of it. You're always so sweet to me. Aww
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