Dreamscape
before twilight,
chimera’s coloring
of heart’s peridot promises,
waiting,
tangible trace
of green shades now appear,
vision’s facets ever shifting
each night,
with hope’s sparkle
on her finger waiting
for his return, in her sleepless
wishes
Author notes
scotty dog (claimed)
tennis racket
crescent moon (claimed)
sweet sixteen
carousel
photo charm
lighthouse (claimed)
4 leaf clover
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Peridot is used to help dreams become a reality.
swirl cinquain
graphic: http://www.myjewelrysource.com/images/peridot-rings/gr3058-peridot-ring.jpg
A contest entry
- Charm me Agian by peridotPixi.
450 points, ended June 27, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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i love the take on the stone you have used in this contest, i like the thoughts of the perido helping dreams to become a reality, maybe i need to pick myself up another ring so my dreams are within reach, keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy
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Claimed!
Scotty dog for me! -
crecent moon
love it. please make it mine.
very good charms.
but i think it should be crescent. -
I am claiming the lighthouse
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Thank you for the entry to my contest, i like the carousel that would be fun, Have fun
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im still waiting to see more entries for before i choose mine, but thank you for marking it, my contests get first choice anyways, you can remove the claim on that one for now, TY ~Amy
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