A fathers love is big enough,
To go all around.
To give to daugthers, sons, and mothers,
Even to lovers and fighters too.
A fathers love is big enough,
for 10s, 100s or even 1,000s of children!
A fathers love can be saved for many, many, years.
But the most important thing about a fathers love is....
You can share it everyday.
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A contest entry
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A fathers love is something that nobody else can give, except for a father... It's a beautiful message that many people should listen to.
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Excellent poem,your father is lucky to have you.Thanks for entering.
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Welcome to Allpoetry and thank you for entering the contest
This is a sweet poem that shows just how amazing dad's can be, to love us all.
Make sure you put your option, although clear, into the authors notes
Welcome to allpoetry, I hope you enjoy the site
I wish you the best of luck in the contest
Miss Faerie
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welcome to allpoetry
This is such a sweet write and dedication to father's. I think you did well. Though it is obvious which option you used here you will still need to put your option number in the author's comments. If you have any questions feel free to ask. Good luck to you in the contest.
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U have packed that abundant love in these few lines here Wonderful ninjagirl.. Keep writing.. Thankyou for this timeless entry in our contest
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Welcome to all poetry
a fathers love is certainly special as he is one person we look up to when we grow up as a child. no matter what age our father always plays a special part in our life even if they seem to be so far away from us. please, however, could you put the option number in your authors notes so that when it comes to judging we know what you used as your inspiration. well done
Charlotte
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Welcome to AllPoetry!
There is something very special about a father's love. And to share it is one of our greatest gifts as children. No matter how old I get, my father will always be my daddy. This is wonderful.
Good luck in the contest and welcome to the site.
Storm
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Welcome to Allpoetry!
Hello!
This is such a lovely poem written about dad's, their love is so wonderful, and you did an awesome job of showing that. Thanks for entering and good luck!
Welcome!
Blessings,
~Michaela~
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Welcome To All Poetry
Hi ninjagirl,
Sounds like you have a good dad cherish him Good poem you have written
Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest
Barbara
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Welcome To Allpoetry
Hi ninjagirl
Very well written, a fathers love is unconditional well thats how it is in most families. You've written a great poem here. Goodluck
Andy - Site Greeter
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